In providing feedback for writing assignments, it makes sense to me to focus on more general aspects of writing (content, main points) in the first draft and more specific aspects (structure, and eventually forms) in subsequent drafts. As an instructor, I believe that it is important to not do all of the editing on a student’s writing drafts. I think that it would be valuable to point out the areas where improvement is needed without giving all of the answers.
For this reason, the idea of using question-form feedback (from the article by Chiu and Sauvignon) appeals to me as something that I may use when commenting on ESL writing drafts. According to the study discussed in the article, there was a high incidence of revisions when question-form feedback was given. I think that allowing the student to reflect on where and why improvement is needed will facilitate independent learning, increase student accountability in subsequent drafts, and eventually result in improvement in future writing samples. I also think that the use of the highlighting feature in MS Word will be a valuable tool when dealing with online learning.
Question(s):
When do you think it would be useful to edit a draft more thoroughly, i.e. provide 'corrections' instead of 'guidance'?
Reflection on CALL Experience
14 years ago